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Shifting colours blue and pink hues that seemingly glow across a dimming sky. Where is time now? Wandering across the land where people fear to tread. Cross the boundaries that extend past the eyes...
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Delightful card game metaphor girding up this reflection on death, dear poetess!! Very cleverly crafted!!
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"Let my soul burst forth into those white embers as life dwindles into nothing as time finds a new hand to play." these lines are immortal..thanks for sharing this wonderful work..
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Wow, I like the imagery you used. I kinda get the feeling of life moving on after death. Awsome.
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Quote:Let my soul burst forth into those white embers as life dwindles into nothing as time finds a new hand to play. cool write ! and awesome to read you my darlin lil sis!!! ~ Secret ~
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Quote:Let my soul burst forth into those white embers as life dwindles into nothing as time finds a new hand to play. What a brilliant closing Laura... *Clapping* Bri~
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Indigo you bleed pain so beautifully. Very strong in emotion. ~ Becky "Express it and seek what you desire and should rightfully have. If not from those who seek to deny your rightful place, go to...
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thank you dear poet for reading me! I wonder what would happen if you bluffed against Fate ... indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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picky girl, thank you very much for reading me! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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thanks for the wonderful reply Halo! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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sis, thanks so much! *hugz* indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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thanks for reading me and commenting Brian! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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becky, thank you very much for the kind words! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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Laura. . . I always enjoy reading you~! The brightest star burns white before burning out. Let my soul burst forth into those white embers as life dwindles into nothing as time finds a new hand to...
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debb, thanks so much for reading and the wonderful comment! I often wonder how many times fate bluffs us at times as well. lots of thoughts wound up in this one. lauraWill the flood behin meput out...
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thanks for checking this one out Po! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI "decemberunderground"
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no matter how dark it gets or how hard it rains, hope will glimmer - even if only diffused. thanks so much scorp! indigoWill the flood behin meput out the fire inside me? The Missing Frame - AFI...
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